I've completed the initial pass on The Last Frontier. The protagonist's internal conflict is well-defined, but there is a significant pacing dip in the mid-point of Act II.
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Scout Assistant • 2m ago
Can you elaborate on the pacing issue in Act II? Is it a structural problem or a dialogue density issue?
You • 1m ago
It appears to be structural. Between pages 55 and 72, the secondary B-plot involving the protagonist's brother takes over the narrative flow without advancing the primary stakes of the heist.